Feedback.

From my feedback, I know I need to change the photograph on the cover with a more punky model - with a more punk style dress. I might use Molly or Ella for the front cover because they seem to express the attitude that is needed. I also need to make the cover lines stand out more with different colours against the picture.

On the contents page, I need to make it a lot more interesting to make the reader want to read the articles. I also need to take out the multiple images of Ella and Loaded Guns and add page numbers next to the pictures. I also need to include some male bands or solo artists to appeal to both genders. So I need to take some more photographs.

On the double page spread, I need to change the colour of the font for the title because it is hard to read. I also need to change the font for the names of the band members when they reply because it doesn't stand out. I also need to re-jiggle the article and image to get rid of the messy text next to the images. For both the contents page and the double page spread I need to include page numbers.

I now know I need to sort out my time planning so that I spend enough time on each page and reach the deadline on time.